We just got carried away and really enjoyed this across the seas session of Haiku and Renga- sitting so far apart, yet our hearts were so close together, working in unison...


Love, the Elixir of life: A rapid-fire-round of Haiku(Zoya) and Renga(Liliana)

Love is Amrit, a potion
for immortality, love is the
Elixir of our lives

let me bless my soul with the
elixir from your sweet soul!

Soul to soul, the love
Flourishes, heart to heart flows
A lovely melody

let our souls bloom together,
let our hearts sing forever...

Heart and soul when in
Unison sing, it's all together
a different feeling

we share the same heart and soul,
our love makes us two a whole...

Love is a fragrant
flower fine; a precious true
gift of God, divine

what soil could be better for
this flower, than our twin souls?...

When love is nurtured
Together, the two hearts soar like
Birds of a feather

Come, my soulmate! Let us lift
this song of love to heaven!

Let us raise a toast
to love, so it flies like a
peace dove, high, high above

may that you and me always
share the taste of today's love!



Authors: Zoya Zaidi and Liliana Negoi
India and Romania
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi and Liliana Negoi





Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2007-01-16 at 00:23

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Individuality
i have a few forms of poetry that i will introduce to thsi site, some i have already posted, see yesterday's actor, my own form. a good collaboration piece here.
2007-02-24


sania
the poem is as beautiful and divine as love itself. a commendable endeavor.
bravo!
2007-01-16


kath
and in the soil of two wonderful poets this precious poem flower is blooming for us to enjoy ...

a very beautiful piece ... sweet as the fragrance of love serene as the mark of true love in our souls

hugs kath
2007-01-16


Janine>K
This is so sweet, love is such a respectful word and you tell this tale with such respect and tenderness. This poem took me to paradise! Great work
2007-01-16


Teala
What an epic tale of love and adoration! Excellent flow, wonderful piece, bravo!
2007-01-16


Kathy Lockhart
a beautiful duet from two lovely poets!
2007-01-16


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This is excellent =)

Is this for thomas's and mine haiku-renga
challenge?

We are putting them all together and getting
a lottle confused =)

bookmarked

liz
2007-01-16


Rob Graber
Nice! I was thinking you two should post this radiant exchange. It would look more pleasing, though, if, instead of including those ugly copyright symbols, you simply entitled it: Love, the Elixir of Life: A Rapid-Fire Round of Haiku (Zoya) and Renga (Liliana)
Just a thought! :-,?
2007-01-16



my very dear friend, allow me to thank you in front of all the others who will read this, for the priceless time shared together! you have offered my soul and spirit and heart a delightful way of celebrating the most treasured feeling of all: love! i am indebted to you, both for that, and for posting the result of this celebration here! again, thank you!

Lilly xxx
2007-01-16