A poem that I want to make a song someday...that's why I call it "A song about you".


A song about you

 I wanted to write a beautiful song,
about the happiness in my life.
The magic day when you came along,
and saved me from using the knife.

I was more dead than alive,
vultures tore my body apart.
You were brave enough to dive,
deep down below to save my heart.

You came in the middle of the night,
and brightened up my dark sky.
Showed me how to reach the light,
and told me I would never die.

Like an angel from paradise,
you left heaven to see me in hell.
The devil was fooled by your disguise,
a million souls were saved from your spell.

Just like the shining sun,
the beauty of your smiling face.
You filled my life with so much fun,
I felt like I was floating in outer space.

You opened my eyes and made me see,
I just wanted to scream and shout!
You set my captured heart free,
that's what this song is about.

I wanted to write a beautiful song,
tell the world how much I love you!
Your understanding made me strong,
now I shine as much as you do.






Poetry by Freeman
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Written on 2007-02-09 at 07:53

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Eadon
I'm beyond words!

"Like an angel from paradise,
you left heaven to see me in hell"

These are the most beautiful lines I have ever read!
2007-02-09


Dan Cederholm
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I have been there done that . . .

And He come to me also in the

middle of the night . . .My Saviour!

And the black night was lighten . ..

This could be a beautiful song . . .

And I hope you made a song out

of it!!!

All the best to you, Dan

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2007-02-09


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow!What a pleasant coincidence I have written a short story for Alienas challenge Wounded angel and your song is like a tribute to my story with the title: the wounded angel *applause* A lovely song. . . I am sure that from the moment you written this song it is traveling through space and time until this soul that the song is all about hears it :)
2007-02-09


kath
an angel has shown itself and the person of the poem was brave enough to see it ... it is a wonder when we experience such magic in our lives .... and in your words I read all the magic and greatfulness ..

"You were brave enough to dive,
deep down below to save my heart."

this is for me two lines that tell so much ... and they tell that the person of the poem was brave enough to see and aknowledge what he saw...

best wishes
kath
2007-02-09