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Rainy day Sunday by M.A.Meddings

Rainy day Sunday

By M.A.Meddings

Just another hotel bedroom
Rainy day Sunday
Broken vows
But not on Monday
Going nowhere
But good whilst it lasted
Fine by me but please
Take care
Rainy day Sunday




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Written on 2005-10-29 at 08:28

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weirdzarun
Images of a dark and stormy beginning to a new week, a new life, a new woman, or perhaps the same. Is a woman a week, one with many days and weathers, and they always swing around again after a cold weekend? I think so, my friend.
2008-09-19


kath
what to say... in my present state of mind I am lost in your words and don't know which fot to stand on when reading it... it makes me sad... I think.. oh I really don't know any more
2006-12-29


Coolaaron88
One day can be so powerful and yet can be filled with rememberance. You have captured the release of love. I loved it
*Bookmarked*
2006-09-24


John Ashleigh
ARGH!

So much stubborness and sadness in this poem. So much faith in vows to a more promised day! I really like this poem, it truly reads a day.
2005-10-31