This is really old, but I figure I'd publish it anyway.


Holding my last breath

This is my call of farewell
This is where I end it all
Drowning in the deepest well
This is as low as I could fall

I know you occasionally hate me
And the things I say and do
And I do deserve it, I agree
But I occasionally hate you too

You deserve it as much as I
I'm not all to blame
And I wanna ask you why
It is me you always maim?

We've both made mistakes
And it was our own faults
Drowning in our separate lakes
Dancing by ourselves in a strangling waltz

But I just wanna tell you
This is where it ends
All that we've gone through
Apparently doesn't mean will can still be friends

Because this is where I end it
My life is now complete
I just wanna quit
I'm gonna press 'Delete'

I have the letter ready
The sharpened knife, too
I'll hold it nice and steady
And within moments, I won't be here to bother you






Poetry by Eadon
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Written on 2007-02-25 at 19:35

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Rob Graber
Mutually deserved hate: interesting theme!
PS: Lines 7 and 9 need "deserve."
2007-02-26