the coulor




the deepest of blue
a story I read
as your body moves

appleblossom
falling
and me

watching love
touching
circles of time

white is the coulor
protecting us




Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-03-01 at 13:15

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brian paglia
you have a style about you that is unique to say the least.i'm inspired by it, for i struggle to branch outside my comfort, which is pretty standard.anyways,i enjoy not being able to grasp your work on the first go around.that is what makes a good piece:provoking as much thought and energy towards the message,should you also have something meaningful to share(which it appears you do)you begin to truly offer more than words.my name is brian and the pleasure was all mine!
2007-03-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
watching love
touching
circles of time

white is the coulor
protecting us

Watching love touch the circles of time stupendous images
like Michel Le Grandes Windmills of your mind

and in the mind of a romantic the colour of purest love is snow white well done rgds Michael
2007-03-01