i recently broke up wit my fiance an the father of my baby-to-be, an we decied to stay friends but his tryin to control my life an i dont know wat to do about it. i want to be friends for my babies sake but i dont know if my happiness is worth sacrificing

you did this

a final hit, the balance tips,
i plunge downwards to my death,
no smile upon my face, no smile upon my lips,
even this is stolen from me.

my hope, my faith, my darkness,
all stolen, now nothing exists,
you have plunged me into my madness,
for this, forever i will hate you.

i was once young and cheerful,
before you entered my life,
you have pushed to far, now i am fearful,
trapped in my madness within.

Poetry by amy-leigh
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Written on 2007-03-07 at 08:22

Tags Madness  Death  Darkness 

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well written ya..:)

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You should think which you obviously do of your baby and to allow some one to control your life would be unwise but your poem i believe signifies you have your feet on the ground Amy just be yourself love your baby and stay here there of lots of friends here for you to communicate with

well done on the poetry and hey show us a picture of the baby

good luck rgds Michael

from you pic you look like a strong person but sometimes thats only on the outside ,so be as strong as you look and no one will stand in your way and remember people come and go but you will always be there for you.