Jonaay means good-bye in Japanese.


Jonaay

Double meanings strike towards me hard
Like a double-edged sword
Raw larynx reflect
Idle kiss regret
Set me free of this
Neglect
I ask thee
Why can't we connect?
To communicate by choice
Voice 2 voice
And hear not just the noise
But the sound of our joy!

Strip down, irritate the realm
Of simplicity we found
Vamoose, it's gone
Complexity dragged on
Who lives in this song?

A military visionary
Enveloped in this stationary
Enveloped in me
Those tactics I've seen
But were it merely a dream
That I could be his queen?

Come not to these conclusions now


katiiieanne




Poetry by katiiieanne
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Written on 2007-03-15 at 03:41

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katiiieanne
I'm wondering if this ending leaves the reader hanging? Do you, my readers feel a closure in this piece?
2009-04-09


Rob Graber
I too like "vamoose," and also the closing line...
2007-06-20


ardent.March
Vamoose, good word!.
I like this, I like your style of freeverse.
2007-03-21