A note to my friend


Doc, this is where it hurts

Doc, it hurts in my soul
can you help me
I know if you charged
me for your advice
you'd be wealthy

Doc it hurts in my heart
what can you perscribe
what can you give my
heart that cries

Doc it's a mess in my head
how do I get my focus back
How do I put my family first
and get back on track

Doc I feel so empty
and my distractions
don't work
No matter how much
I try somehow it
still hurts.





Poetry by Will
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Written on 2007-04-05 at 04:29

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...this is intense
piercing to the inmost of the inmost,
it speaks the very thoughts that
the myriads of disturbed us would never
at any one time find a way to express...

...bookmarked...
2007-04-12



This has to be BOOK MARKED!
Right from the first line I could feel the pain of a soul crying out for help. Its strong. A great read. I can really understand it too.
Thanks for posting it,
Sally
2007-04-11


Kathy Lockhart
Will these poems from your breaking heart are so touching. In your pain you create beauty. I am wishing you strength and pray blessings upon you. ((hugs)) bookmarked
2007-04-05