Zainab
this was an amazing piece

NIce write like always
Well done ^^
2007-04-21

kath
.... this is why the soul of a person we love carries so much more than a fixed up surface ... that is why love still is and always will be the mystery man will never solve .... as it is life in its most beautiful form ... sacred in essence ... vulnerable and delicate still stronger than anything .....

a beautiful write for the love of your woman


best wishes
kath
2007-04-21

Lourdes
ay , to be loved like that ... *sigh ..
She so lucky
Beautifully written
2007-04-20

TheLine
That's life as it should be.
That is truly the source of love, or at least a way to describe the adoration of the female sex. (If you excuse me for being so Freudian" :P

Great written!
2007-04-20

Elle
meant to say I've bookmarked this - I think this should make editors choice ;)

Elle x
2007-04-19

Elle
Very touching and special poetry - a gift of words to take you into a womans heart :)

Elle x
2007-04-19

Rob Graber
In the great tradition of Shakepeare's sonnet CXXX ("My true love's eyes are nothing like the Sun")!

"raw woman beauty": I love it!

oh, and the phrase is pretty good too... ;-,?
2007-04-19

A hero in flame!
2007-04-19

nature
absolutely beautifull beyond measure
2007-04-19

Kathy Lockhart
You are the most romantic man i have ever encountered. Beautiful and Genuine. What a perfect way to start my day reading such poetry filled with love. xxxxxxyb
2007-04-19

kip
'No lipstick nor painted face defines your grace'

...so well conjured a sentiment held a men too many. this is beautiful work...definately worth the read...
2007-04-19

:) ok...we've got a very much in love hero here...:) and beautiful love poetry too! as usual, actually...
Lilly xxx
2007-04-19