Reese just said the word in class and I started scribbling..this is what I came up with...
I like repitition nowadays..It's reflected in a lot of my poems.



Space

Space
Give me space
Give me place to be me
Space
Give you space
Give you place to be near me
Space
Give us space
Give us place to be 'we'.




Poetry by Inspired
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Written on 2007-04-19 at 10:53

Tags Repitition  Place  Space 

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TheLine
This is interesting. This poem actually says a lot and with very vief words. (Or the same words over and over again) :D
Nice one.
2007-04-20


Rob Graber
This is pretty neat! (Note that the last line needs "place.")
2007-04-19