no more



so hush
no more hurt
closeing doors now

cold days
no more pain
ice protecting fire

we a making of loneliness




Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-05-20 at 09:54

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Pamela A Lamppa
This is soft within the cold reality of heartbreak. I liked this.

we, a making of loneliness.

How it hurts when we are in that place.



Nicely done. ~Pam
2007-05-21


Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
From its beginning, "so hush no more hurt ..." to its ending, "we a making of loneliness", this is a haunting elegy, a moment for breath and reflection.
2007-05-21


amandeep
different kind of poetry and full of emotions..... i like the second stanza...... which is so powerful...
2007-05-20


John Ashleigh
This poem is comforting in the way that a mother protects her baby. So much emotion, well done kath.
2007-05-20


Zoya Zaidi
'Ice protecting fire'
I love that Kath!
Love, Zoya
2007-05-20