An awkward attempt to get the creative juices flowing


Impressive depression

The day has come where thoughts and feelings have betrayed me
And words have become nothing more than a chore
Whatever happened to the carelessness that was once my strongest weakness?
The ability to misconstrue, has left me feeling bitter too
and all thats left is shallow depth inside a poem I wrote for you
As days get shorter:nights,they torture.Time goes by but not in order
Prayers and dreams, and begging seems, to only bring me closer
To "eventually" which essentially,is exactly what I hope for


Hearts and minds across the bay,beware of what you read
For what appears to be a rose,might simply be a weed




Poetry by brian paglia
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Written on 2007-05-26 at 19:26

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BlueyedSoul
excellent Brian...you never cease to amaze me with your talent!
write on my friend
blue
2007-05-30


Janine>K
Yippy!! You are back NOW the bay can start living again..

You have created a masterpiece once again... although it is so sad the real description of depression you have shaped a sad soul with glorious meaning..

Thanx for sharing this Brian

So nice to have you back
2007-05-29


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Well this was certainly a rose and smelled as sweet!

luv esti
2007-05-26