David Hazell
'Raw feminine beauty'
Thanks. I'll use that line when I get my next delivery of viagra.
2007-06-09

M Heathcote
This kind of sounds like a lovely observation
Felt internally by a father
On realizing his daughter has matured into
A thing of womanly beauty!

(And raw meaning innocents)

Enjoyed...
2007-06-08

weirdzarun
Very beautiful and touching piece. Love her, in all her beauty!
2007-06-05

Phyllis J. Rhodes
raw and beauty don't belong in the same sentence when describing most women. But you are right about my sister. She needs no enhancement. Her beauty glows from the inside out. It comes from a kind and tender heart and a very intelligent brain.
And when she smiles the rest of the world darkens in shame.
2007-06-04

Kathy Lockhart
Love comes softy and sets my heart on fire. The peace in this poem is all because of love--ours. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-06-04

Hagzissa
And this was a very sweet and beautiful declaration of love.
Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-06-03

Amanda K
Wow!!!that was so emotional.


best regards,
2007-06-03