In need of comfort

One broken heart
Two heavy tears
One look at his face
And it confirmed her fears
He looked like a lost child
Face buried in his hands
His sobs growing louder
Breaking the silence around
One warm hug
Two caressing arms
One look at her face
And it restored his faith.

Poetry by Shraddha Manvi
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Written on 2007-06-15 at 12:54

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Zoya Zaidi
Beautifully done!
(((Hugs Shraddha)))
Love, Zoya

Rob Graber
I like this; the closing couplet is most effective!

this is truely a beautifull piece
we are all need of comfort sometimes
very heart warming
i enjoyed it very much !!!!!!!!

Lea Foverskov
very short, simple and to the point - a very nice read!

All it takes, in a beautiful write. Thanks for sharing, Tai