No worries... I´m just tired.... so very tired.....




When feeling like standing

on a sinking ship

With water up to the chin


Everything is spinning so fast

hard to keep walking

on the right track


So much to do

so little time

You can only be so much

when the energy so easily

gets flushed away

in a seconds rush


No miracel-button to push

and my strength isn´t in organizing

more in act and react

But right now very hard to stay intact



Knowing everything will work out

in the long run


Still feels like I´ve taken

water over my head

with everything to fix

and all the bureaucracy-mambo-jambo

to mix

and in the same time

cope to deal with

everything else.....


Totally tired.....


and I still do not want to go

to the dentist



2007 © Jeanette Louridas




Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2007-07-16 at 18:27

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Kathy Lockhart
Oh bless your heart Jeanette. Life can sometimes feel like a sinking ship and still there is the dentist to contend with. ooo boy when it rains, storms, gales, hails, wails we still must hang on. Smile with those pearly whites Jeanette. : )

Jason Monroe
HA! You got me with that last line! I hate the dentist too, but apparently you hate them more!! :<

Well written..nice work!