Just words.....


Silencio

 

Leaning against

the wall of silence

 

Sshhh......

 

A wall with empty words

filled with nails

Penetrating the mind

where

sorrow tags a long

on lonely trails


Sshhh.....

 

Speaking soft against the wall

using

lowercase letters

Keeping the silence from standing too tall

 

Sshhh....

 

Silence can say so much more

Than any word

could ever perform

 

after all.....

 





Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2008-05-07 at 11:47

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2008-11-20


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
i will
say one thing it reminds me of the silence found in an empty yet half lit room natural light of course quite empty without pictures on the walls and at gloaming or even dawn
you can almost hear the silence thundering this poem is so evocative well done rgds Mike
2008-05-08


Kathy Lockhart
i dare not speak when silence is golden
quietly written poetry says much.
2008-05-08


Will
Excellent Write!!!
2008-05-07


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I agree, it is often what is not said, that is more important - we should learn to read between the lines at times

Elle x
2008-05-07