It Was Only the Weather


Breeze.

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I thought that I was happy

but it was only a cloud floating by

I thought that I saw brighter days coming

but it was only the sun shining in my eye

 

I thought that I was feeling fine

but it was only the warmth in the air

I thought that I had seen the last of my worries

but it was only the absence of a dark cloudy sky

 


I thought that I was feeling better

but as a matter of fact...

 


it was only a breeze

gently passing by

 


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Poetry by TheLine
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Written on 2007-07-21 at 01:36

Tags Feelings  Thoughts  Life 

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Well if it takes a good clear breeze to make you feel better, I am blowing up one for you from across the atlantic The Line. Very gentle stroll through the mind of a lost soul indeed. Nice to read your work again, smiling at you, Tai

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2007-07-21


penfold18
Wonderfully written in both flow and content.

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2007-07-21