a little bit of truth, a little bit fiction,mostly a play with words


Just writing

 

 

I

Want to write

don't know if I should

Being 

too tired

Feeling 

a little bit sad

Oversensitively mad

without knowing the

probable cause

So I want to write

But I  don't know if I should

maybe it's time to take

a pause

Overactive without the

ability to rest

To my poor surrounding

I'm becoming an

emotional pest

So I do want to write

But maybe I'd better

let the pen rest

for a while 

 

 

 





Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2007-07-31 at 14:50

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Dont you dare your poetry is a wonderful gift you share with us Jeanette write on please rgds mike
2007-07-31


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I feel like that sometimes - especially at the moment when I am flat out trying to get things organised before going away - yet even if its the odd line, I still scribble stuff - most of it a bit la la - but I guess thats what we do - Great work hope you feel less tired soon

Elle x
2007-07-31


Coolaaron88
Funny isn't it that we all want to write but the fact that we might take it to far gets to us. This was certainly a wonderful poem and I'm here applauding for you. ; )

~Aaron Rowe
2007-07-31