Loveable mood


 Early morning casts a light

even when the sun is hiding behind the clouds

There's still a brightly shining light

following me around


The sun

personified as you


Never did I knew

or even suspect

That feeling as strong as these

was even possible to detect


But they are

and there is


Amazing how life can turn

from running away from the fast-lane to hell

To finding the path

to the way only heaven can tell


With every being in me

and for every beat my heart will take

Always and forever

will I cherish and treasure the being

of us

completing the sentence containing

We and Eternity 





2007 © Jeanette Louridas

Poetry by Hagzissa
Read 1009 times
Written on 2007-08-08 at 10:12

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Some ppl. have a "way" of expressing tragedy, darkness, workingout (myself) or various other subjects.
You have a gift or a "way" of expressing LOVE

Amazing Write!!


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
You are a truly beautiful poet and this is a wonderful example of your gentle stylish word power well done rgds Mike