well it's my first piece coming back to poetry. i hope y'all like it. it goes along nicely and was inspired partly from james blunt - goodbye lover. and also a dear loved one going into the navy.


Talking Across Waters

Talking across waters
Laughing and smiling
I could hear you smile
Without you saying a thing

I longed for the confidence
To say
I love you

You have changed my life
I know you well
One obsession
One addiction
To this love
Such strong a love
That could be broken
By these harsh years
Been broken
Had tears cry
Spirits have been beaten
We have been crushed

I'm felt you cry
Without you knowing
I cannot live without you
I cannot love without you

Talking across waters
You tell me that I complete
You
I complete your life
You
Complete my soul
This I whisper
So you cannot hear

But I know you know
And feel so too

I can tell in your gentle
Voice of yours
That you've been hurt and used too much

But i can wash away all that
If you give me a chance




Poetry by jacy
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Written on 2005-12-04 at 01:35

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Zoya Zaidi
oooooooooooh! what a write...Absoluteky charming...hertfelt write for a loved one across the waters(what a lovely expression)...They say :"distence makes heart grow fonder"...but they also sat:"too much of it makes heart s go yonder"....I DO HOPE, THE LATER PART NEVER HAPENS TO YOU? WELCOME BACK JACY!!(((HUGS)))
YOU HAVE GROWN!!!
2005-12-09