On receiving your wonderful comments on Poetbay


Like Champagne


"It shimmers." he said,
Of the little verse
I wrote.
How warming to receive
Praise
Instead of beats.
No longer the naughty girl.

"Roses at your feet!"
She said.
How lovely and kind.
To be worshipped for a moment,
I drank it like
Champagne,
Sparkling with your adoration,
I just want to
Thank you.





Poetry by Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2005-12-09 at 11:16

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Zoya Zaidi
I agree with pen entirely, you've got what you deserve esti!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are so vulnerable!
((((((hugs))))))
xxx, Zoya
2005-12-13


penfold18
No need Esti you deserved and earned the praise you received and no one can take that away from you.:-))
2005-12-09