just something i put on a piece of paper while waiting for a bus..


Your Winter

The snow fell on my cold face
And a sweet darkness
Surrounded my open eyes
Everything was healing now

Not as it had done before
But in a new
Caressing deadly way
Whom I alone could feel

And I stepped into
The snowy white land
Where flowers blossomed
Through the ice

And caressed the winter
My soul smiled back at me
Your winter has come




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2007-09-30 at 12:32

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Edgar John Jackson
It's made me walk thru the lonely snowy streets of my soul. I like how U have used nature, snow to describe a place we can feel so deep within... thanks for sharing this
2007-10-25


moon smile
Sometimes the weather shares our mood with us,or our soul makr us see life from its own perspective where only our heart can touch life whether with agony or happiness.And that is the real scene which we sometimes could hide from others , but not from us.Good piece,it gave me a chance to think and to feel the reality of ourselves.'I hope to be friends".Moon smile.
2007-09-30


Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
A poetic irony!

"And I stepped into
The snowy white land
Where flowers blossomed
Through the ice"

Love this very much.
2007-09-30