engraved





standing by
and you rise
reaching

music in stars
words let loose

our hands touching
moments engraved





Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-12-13 at 08:04

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Kathy Lockhart
Kath, your talent for creating such magnificient feelings that take my breath away with so little words is awesome. : )
2007-12-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Kath this is a wonderful poem so evocative of yearning in love well done rgds
mike
2007-12-13


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Moments definitely engraved within our hearts, simply beautiful and evocative writing

Elle x
2007-12-13


Rob Graber
This is really wonderful; "moments engraved" and saved for life...
2007-12-13


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Kath...really lovely poem...enjoyed reading it

just one suggestive comment

Shouldn't it read "words let loose" not "words let lose"
Unless I'm not understanding it correctly

xxxx Stan
2007-12-13