Stan Cooper
Esti...good write....but the best part for me, at least, is

"The prettiest of lasses,
With the sassiest of asses,
Jiggling along"

I've got to get me to that mall


xxxx from your new found lover of malls....xxxx Stan
2007-12-25

Century
Very skilled expression of a simple impression. Makes me think ... and that's something poetry is supposed to do, hopefully a lot more than just entertain. Thanks for the nice observation.
2007-12-24

Rob Graber
Lots of fun, in the mouth and ear as well as semantically!
2007-12-24

ken d williams
Well writan , Esti, It as if the guverment wont , neet to buld o=up resentment , by alowing in migrants. Legaly elegerly. As if the guvermet wont , need pepole to devide and riot , in some futcher time./ It is not the mirants I am angey at , but the guvernment. The migrants from the older nastions , now with the new mebers of the E E C. They are just takeing advantige of the free flow of workers. Now the wages are bein pulld down. pepole afder geting despret , big time , and it worsans day by day. it was hard before to get workm, now it is all but imposabul to find work. Soon this countrey will erupt , that I fear grestly. AsEngland did a few yesrs ago , it will againe :(.
Well writan , well exprest , Esti.
Ken D williams
2007-12-24