Naked

I`m naked in my beeing
Indeed I am undressed
Nothing is outside me
No masks to wear today

I`m essentially only
The one i`m ment to be
Nothing hides my flesh
My soul is next to me

In this state of freedom
Without the burdens of
My body whom is seen
I`m looking at the swirling planet

Without me



Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2008-03-16 at 15:05

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Kathy Lockhart
sometimes it's the best place to be--floating outside ourselves looking inside ourselves. well done.
2008-03-17


Bob
Yes I like this too, the bare skin/soul, the view from outside looking in.
Bengt
2008-03-16



I like this. It is an Alien thing :)
2008-03-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
an out of body experience that is what came to me on first readinf but then i saw you out sidein the rain looking into a restaurent filled with ppl and a table with lots around it and an empty chair waiting for you well done on ther imagery here rgds mike
2008-03-16