our room





between days
in the midst of transition
I turn towards the middle

and find the softness
of you
we float in a world

closer to center- point
where structures erode
as time shapes us slowly

and stillness fills our room





Poetry by kath
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Written on 2008-05-06 at 20:07

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"we float in a world" I understand your text! and I love the picture you put in it..nicely done!!!kisses
2008-05-07


Rob Graber
This is wonderfully soothing!

Line 8 (which is GREAT) needs "erode."
2008-05-07