Written on a beach..Calicut, Kerela! :)

Sea and me

When all that can keep you from sinking is the sea

You think of me

When all that can keep you from thinking is the sea

You sink in me 

Poetry by Puddled
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Written on 2008-06-04 at 15:48

Tags Sea  Sinking  Me 

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Amna Ehsan
How dexterously you've wrapped your feelings. I hope the addressee get it.

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Nice play on words here Puddled and it is so nice playing by the sea! Smiling at you, Tai

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