lost in thought, and couldn't write what i was trying to say...this could very well be a helpless romantics loose thoughts.


Just thinking

Her eyes, I can see myself in her eyes
Deep blue crystal from with in
And that smile to chip the edge
She laughs and it shakes the house
That hair it gets me everytime
Swaying in the breeze, teasing me
Long soft and enchanting wrapping
Wrapping around my hands
When she touches me my soul closes
She makes me a fool, and sort of a tool
I go dumbfounded, these simple words
It's as if I go numb to the bones
These simple words to say simple things




Poetry by AZ
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Written on 2005-07-07 at 21:26

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LurieJune
I do think you are a hopeles romantic!!!! The world needs more like you!!! Beautiful!
2005-07-09


SomThinWikid
I like this one, AZ. You are a wonderful romantic!!
2005-07-09


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
i really enjoyed this read, although one thing nagged at me... the fool/tool line felt like a forced rhyme... just my opinion. other than that, i liked it... especially the part about her laughter shaking the house, that's beautiful. :)
2005-07-07


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
women hold the power over us, their beauty catches us and we step closer, wanting to be caught :)
2005-07-07