Perhaps the best poem is one that is not written down, yes?

 




Words fail me...Again

I'll try,

Even as I am lost for words, to describe how I'm freed

by your love that traps my heart.

Now, to start:

 

Let me compare thee to a summers da..

Been done.

 

How doth your smile shine great amongst the..

Not that either.

 

Your love is like a rose, witheri..

Too cliche.

 

Like an angel your eyes gleam with a heav..

Ugh, no!

 

There was a young girl from the country,

Who fell in love with, uh, um,

That won't work.

 

Walking through autumnal woods hand in hand with you,

We saw a brave young sparrow who..

Not good enough!

 



 

I tried,

Even the greatest poets and thinkers could not succeed.

I guess this will have to do:

 

I love you.





Poetry by Joe Fern
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Written on 2008-09-19 at 03:53

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Puddled
:) nice!
2008-11-24


Dee Daffodil
This is a very cool poem. You put a lot of thought into this one. Sometimes words just can't express the emotions of the heart.
Hugs,
Dee
2008-10-08