If I could I would...

When the world seems mean and bestial
I wish I could take you to the city of celestial
And I would if I could

I sacrifice everything to kiss you now
The only question that remains is how
You just have to know
That I would
If I could

When it's cold outside, and you tremble
A world filled with warmth I assemble
At least I would
If I could

And someday I know I should
If I can
Then I will...

Poetry by Peter
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Written on 2006-01-23 at 14:35

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Veld Cooper
Another inspiring tale of young love - you do it so well, Peter!

well done Peter thoroughly enjoyed this one,flows very well :-))

...the flow of the poem, the rhyme, the repetition at the end of each stanza and most certainly an ending that leaves one yearning for more, all blended into one cohesive whole that i call, a good read...