for somone i know and like....????


just a dream.

As darkness sucks on the burnt embers of my life,
I see you in a burst of light.
My soul will follow you into the depths time.

The moon washes over us in glorious delight
A chance for our love to blossom in the darkness of night
And your eyes search the distance
Looking for the path of our life.

I turn the pages you wrote down
And I tumble like a stone
Holding the dreams in my hart
Praying for my wish to start.




Poetry by Nige
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Written on 2009-06-29 at 21:28

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Jackie Ameriault
It was glorious to be sure, this dream of yours
2011-09-23


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This is SO sweet

I like the sentiment in this
but was wondering if the 3rd
line in the 1st stanza is ment
to read "into the depths of time"
instead of "into the depths time" ?

A GORGOUS poem

~L.~
2009-06-30


Malin Johansson
A very nice poem here!!!
I specially liked this part:
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The moon washes over us in glorious delight
A chance for our love to blossom in the darkness of night

//Malin
2009-06-30