Its really no good. Just thought I'd throw something together though. Probably would have been better if I had written it in one sitting instead of two also. But that can't really be helped. Hope you like it.


Whats Your Worth?

Just wasting your life breathing,
doing nothing every day.

When nothing really matters,
theres no point anyway.

breathe in,
breathe out,
Thats the way to die,
Not a thought in your mind except
why? why? why?

So you think that you're special,
and maybe you really are,

but theres no way to proove it,
till you're actually a star.

breathe in,
breathe out,
Thats the way to die,
Not a though in your mind excpet
why? why? why?

And you finally do something,
wow thats such a crazy idea.

So you've done a great thing now,
but really what now bigshot?

breathe in,
breathe out,
About time you fly,
All your thoughts racing from now until you
die die die~



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-02-12 at 01:55

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
sounds like a great song.

liz
2006-03-11


UnforgivenAngel
this may sound stupid but it makes alot of sense,i completely understand it.its well written.
2006-02-16



Well expressed.
And it really is some good.
Well thrown together.
And yah, we liked it. :_)
2006-02-16


Mary
sometimes i wonder if you're insane... no good hah! it was extremely good!
2006-02-13


Marie
I like it. It's like a song, a story, a truth unfolding beneath itself...you don't have to be a star to be someone exactly, but ok, I get you. Some people do.
2006-02-12


PoeticProcrastination
"No good"? Surely you jest.
2006-02-12