Living / Killing

When you and I existed
Everything looked different
bright sunshine in my sky

When you and I existed
You stopped my heart from bleeding
making me less anemic

-but-

When you and I siezed to exist
Suddenly everything changed again
and my sky became grey

When you and I siezed to exist
My heart bursted in a flood of blood
killing me at the spot

Please don't dance on my grave
even though you already have
your tapping shoes on




Poetry by AngryAngel
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Written on 2006-02-11 at 09:39

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Amanda K
loool funny and sad like killing a living. a very good one.
ALl the best,
AMANDA
2006-07-14


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah, when we are together it is sunshine,
When we fall apart, the world comes apart,
The sky becomes clouded, dark clouds
hover above,
A storm breaks out, sweeping everything awash!

((((hugs dear Angel, you write very well))))))

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-02-23


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
*BOOKMARKED*
love it.
liz.
2006-02-13


Natalie
"Please don't dance on my grave
even though you already have
your tapping shoes on"

Ahh I love it!
2006-02-11