It is very rare that I get this urge of patriotism, but today I feel like it. This one is for the place where I call home.........with love ofcourse.


Cry, my beloved country!

She stands-a silhoutte hollowed out,
Like a bone devoid of marrow.
Her frame stuctureless like a child's graffiti.
Her skinny boughs eerily streched out:
Like a beggar begging for alms.

She who is on the last of her nine lives;
Who despite the tired lines of age,
Makes the beauty of Saturn a chilish fantasy.
Of rolling hills and green pastureland:
This she is made of.
She who has been stabbed in the back
By her own flesh and blood.

Her leaves yellowed, her branches bare.
Those who perch on her,
Do so for reasons benign.
Close enough if you look n her bark,
Are scratches and inscriptions of years gone by;
And void holes left by the peckers.

Oh magnificent one that once was,
Who stripped you of your purle royalty.....
That his eyes we gouge out,His ears clip off
And if still merciful,
His feeble neck snap?
Who mighty queen....
Who has left you so desolate?

It is he who greets you with one hand
Yet steals from you with the other-
He whose soul is tainted scarlet,
He who raped you inside the sacred citadels.
He who you nurtured,you loved,you sacrificed for:
He who is your son.




Poetry by she
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Written on 2006-02-14 at 13:20

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God in His mercy will light the lamps of the past and they shall glitter through the darkness, till the day break and the shadows flee away. It is not what happens to us in this life that defines who we are, but how well we rise after we fall. A very well penned heart felt poem of "shattered" lives.
2006-06-14


Andy
This is amazing... kinda a creepy write! love it.
2006-04-07


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
It sounds [to me] more like your are taking about Mother Earth [Gaia] then any partituar country.
Well written.
Liz
2006-02-27


Kat
Wow! magnificent depiction of those who bite the hand that feeds them. Would instill partriotism even in a dead heart.
2006-02-15


boy
I love your patriotic urge.It is wonderful.
God bless your country
2006-02-15