At The Sorrowgate

I can feel you

standing at the gateway

to my heart.

With your love

trying to unlock

the door.

As you gently slip in

frostbitten stars reconcile

a passion reckless and cruel.

Laser swirls affected

by mayhem and bloodshed

try to reach for you.

In a universe where faith

has vanished long ago

my heart is to dark to love.

You silently turn around

and close the gate

to my sorrowful heart.

Poetry by Elise
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Written on 2010-02-08 at 22:07

Tags Sorrow  Heart  Universe 

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Maria Christina
Are you sure that you're not ME? Sounds like we share the same heart, & that's not always a fun place to be, for sure. I've lived this poem for most of my Life!

God poem!

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Mr painter