I don't know what is happening here? Every one of my dear friends is, unhappy, depressed, or threatening to leave! Though a response to Alex's poem, it is for all those who are down and out and ready to quit their struggle half way through...


Never Give Up Half Way Through!

Alex darling don't be so sad,
I know lately you have had it bad,
Life's not really smiling on you,
There are boulders big in your way it's true
But you have been fighting, and winning too,
Now that you are almost there,
In the battle of foul and fair,
You are coming out a winner dear,
Why are you seized with sudden fear?
Why are you having such gloomy thoughts?
Why are you with self-doubt wrought?
Don't give up, ever in the middle of the fight,
Don't please take from struggles, flight!
You will come out a winner all-right!
Your poetry is so good my dear,
Who says it's not good or not fair?
You have been writing with such flair,
Your heart you are pouring out in there,
This is one expression of your inner self,
Please be true to it, don't give up!
We're your friends and we all love you here,
Who ever said, that we don't care?
Where will you run away form home?
Because this is your shelter, this is your home,
Stay, dear Alex don't leave your home!

((((((Hugs Alexander, Don't Succumb!)))))
((((((Stay, Alexander, Don't you Run!)))))))

Love, xxx, Zoya


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright ©: Zoya Zaidi




Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-02-28 at 18:55

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lynn
aww.. this poem is beautiful it put a smile on my face thank you!
amber lynn
2006-03-08


c g shankar
you aregreat Ziya dear!in giving cheers to peers you excel all , truly! You are inspiring withyourlovely comments from the dayI posted my first poem at this site! thank you dear!
ove.xxx.ceegee
2006-03-07


UnforgivenAngel
sorry,i forgot to rate. oh and i forgot to say.its important not to give up half way through,when things start looking up,dont give up.
2006-03-03


UnforgivenAngel
wow,things have to get worse to get better and it seems things are getting better for alex and i hope they do,i hope alex things do get better but once again zoya,great poetry.
2006-03-03


BlueyedSoul
Dear Zoya....how can we not love one such as you? You send love and encouragement to everyone of us and we would be lost without you!!!

Lovely writing as always so full of your heart and soul.

~Cindy
2006-03-02


Teala
Uplifting!! Bravo!
2006-03-01


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Even though it's for Alex,
Thank you Zoya.
*BOOKMARKED*
Liz
2006-03-01


Malin Johansson
...Beautiful as always Zoya...

(( hugs ))
2006-02-28


Alexander
Zoya.. Thank you so much. I wrote a new poem:) Read it:) It is called The Soul Of Words Fights
2006-02-28


Christian Ward
Quite upbeat and positive, love it!
2006-02-28