I want to be in love



I want to be possessed and obsessed by it
I want the sky to change color
and the sun to shine all the time
I want to long for the phone to ring and
pace the room when it doesen't
I want to be breathless at the sound of his voice
and toungue -tied when I first see him
I want to be him and make him me



Poetry by Lori
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Written on 2006-03-13 at 10:06

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Esti D-G
Excellent poem. Compressed emotion beautifully expressed by you. The dream every girl has longing for true love. I know it well! (see my "Boys and their toys" which is vaguely connected.) Loadzaluv esti
2006-05-18


QuiZZer
Don't listen to Troll. Nothing is better than the feeling of love.

I like the poem very much, hope it works out for the best. =)
2006-03-18


Troll
And when you're in it, you'll want to be out of it. All miserable all the time, and jealous, and not sure he loves you as much as you love him, and all the things about him you were going crazy about are now the things that'll drive you crazy. Sound about right? Love, bleh.
2006-03-17


Dan Cederholm
But you must have the phone loaded
my sweet darling!!!
The one!!!
2006-03-17


lynn
this poem is ever so beautiful great write!!! :)
amber lynn
2006-03-13


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey there this poem speaks the words i want to express for someone i am in love with well done for putting my words to shame
rgds M.A.Meddings
2006-03-13


Dan Cederholm
"I want to long for the phone to ring and
pace the room when it doesen't
I want to be breathless at the sound of his voice"

You take the breath out of me...
thats for shure...

Sincerly, Your Dan
2006-03-13