Pilgrimage

Perhaps, nearing the end, we can find again

What was lost through no fault of our own;

Remembering with no regrets or remorse,

Seeking out those few places we had known

And belonged and never thought we’d leave;

As if in returning we could really come back

To find our only innocence waiting there.

 

Following sixty years to the house I first knew

There is something reverent and sacramental

In finding a church now on that holy ground,

And I hear myself remembering a child’s prayer.

Perhaps, nearing the end, what we seek again

Is not the innocence of a time and a place

But the deathless grace of our first lost religion.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2011-10-01 at 15:58

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Jim's right. This is nicely written, Fog. I'm not a religious person, but I know the feeling you describe. It comes to me when I return to certain places. Home wasn't one of them. Every time I went back to the house in which I grew up, I was filled with paranoia and despair. I was glad when my mother sold it.
2011-10-02



This is a strong poem with well-defined structure and content, and it came to mind as I read it, and noting the repeated line, that it, with some re-working, would make a fine villanelle, a natural fit.
2011-10-01