Broken faith

Around the bend, I lost my friend,
Gashing the heart in maximum pain,
She has gone man, shocking down my nerves & vein,
Wastage of time, loosing of faith &
Finally nothing in gain....




Poetry by Zalan
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Written on 2011-10-20 at 12:59

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A sad piece, my friend.
I have some experience of losing friendship myself, so I empathise with your plight. And you bring out the pain very well with your words '[g]ashing' and 'shocking'.
Gentle applause from Birdie today :>)
2011-10-20