March Night

Above, glimpsed here and there through

A canopy of oaks and black walnut,

The cold light of a few random stars,

Some already passed into darkness

Though we've not received the news yet,

Like old friends we have lost track of.

 

The only constellations are here below,

Circling you as though you are the one

Fixed point in this universe of woods -

Acquarius, Aquila, Columba and Corvus,

Lacerta and Lepus, Pisces and Hydrus -

 

Less shapes than the sounds you hear

When you close your eyes to the dark,

Not to deny it but to embrace it, enter

Into it and hear the light movements in

Leaves and limbs, soft pads on stones,

Splashes rippling over the still water.

 

The fire you made against the chill

Of distant death is embers and ashes,

The ring of stones cold worlds circling

A dying star.  Deep in shadows, Ursa

Stirs and settles in her cave of sleep.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2012-03-28 at 16:05

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Amy Valentina
The best way I can appreciate 'March Night' is to simply say, your poem took me there and I vividly remember watching the stars, esp. the constellation 'The Big Dipper' popularly known as 'Saptarishi' in India.

LOL,
Amy
2012-03-29


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Great stuff! I recall nights like you describe. A peace, gentleness and harmony that your talent with words speaks of so well.

Bravo!

Joe
2012-03-28


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Your soft words
paint beauty
in my heart
Thanks for sharing
N T
2012-03-28



A beautiful poem, countryfog.
Yesterday's clear and still spring evening here is recalled in this piece, together with my own meditations to some extent. I love the description of nature at night and I admire the final stanza for its pensive mood and imagery.
Applause!
2012-03-28