In response to Cuddly's challenge; A Richtameter; With valuable inputs from Ylva...


Caring and Sharing

Caring
sharing, baring
my heart to you, always
has been like a passion for me,
my dearest love, and it is true. Just look,
for once, look deep into my eyes
and you will know it's true.
I bare my soul
Caring.


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi

Calligraphy by and ©: Zoya Zaidi



Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-04-10 at 13:09

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Daybreaker
All we need is LOVE!

Let's care and share! =)
2006-04-12


Kathy Lockhart
I love these different styles of poetry. This was well done and with such a dear, sweet message. Your openess and caring is very evident in your writings and your comments. Kathy
2006-04-11


GB
Ahhh Z ... Oh so sweet . This poem also works both ways , if U know what I mean . Think TRUE LOVE is when BOTH SIDES recipacate. G
2006-04-11


Feiyn
a flowing sensation of passion
2006-04-11


Alaina K. Johnson
Beautiful!
2006-04-10


Zoya Zaidi
Richtameter I mean!
2006-04-10


Zoya Zaidi
Richameter follows the pattern of 2 4 6 8 10 8 6 4 2 syllable counts thus making a nine line poem, dear Umang, and it gives you a headache in the end.
(((((hugs)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-04-10


Umang
lol..nice poem...but whats a richtameter....lol...i know im too crude to be a poet
2006-04-10


Teala
Very sweet!!
2006-04-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hey there Zoya a beautiful richtameter
and so enchanting a skillful poet brings us her lovely use of words well done regards mike
2006-04-10