Don't let it happen


Take a second look



When intuition is butchered by advice -
So will the essence of emotion, and what is left,
will only be fabricated feelings.
Too many defense mechanisms
will soon shape the core purpose of any life,
into a robotic reflex.




Poetry by zana
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Written on 2014-08-30 at 18:27

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When intuition is butchered by advice

made me think that advices are mountains build of disillusioned intuitions
2014-09-01


sagi
True!
'The usual' is what that kills love, ambitions, egotistical endeavours and insecurity bred from past failures.
Lovely write!
2014-09-01


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2014-08-31



Yep, we close down, become defensive, to protect ourselves and before we know we are just robots.
2014-08-31



This is true and something to consider:)
2014-08-30