You're a fire
Icy water I am
You're a stone
Flaccid cotton I'm
You're an opportunist
An opportunity I'm
You're a murky forest
Spreading road I'm
You're the doubts
Clarification I'm
You're egoistic
Altruistic I'm
You're regrets
Joy I am
You're a miser
Spendthrift I'm

You're a moral trader
Treasurer of them I'm.

Poetry by Bhakta Raj Giri
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Written on 2015-04-14 at 20:02

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
You describe very well the fundamental concept of yin and yang.
Nice clear, consise language. I would recommend the continuation of "I am rather than I'm as it would seem to allow for better rhythm in the reading of the poem.