Off With His Heart!

Burning deep inside me, is a question I need to ask
Revealing what's beneath the skin, behind this impassive mask
A question that has long lingered in memory cast in doubt
A feeling I admit, I nor whisper nor I shout
But it has overwhelmed me, to the point of no return
Because deep down inside me, this question persists to burn
I feel it rising silently, I feel in my throat
There is no cure for this feeling, no common antidote
"Pray tell us, Sir, for you rambled like a fiend"
My question is of a love that sends me to the guillotine
"Pray tell us, Sir, which Dear Lady pens this strife?"
My Dear Sir, my kind Dear Sir, that Lady is your wife.




Poetry by Shas Ramlogan
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Written on 2006-04-28 at 01:35

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Teala
Emotions perfectly capured here!
2006-06-02


Mischa Ash Brookes
ditto. no one can tell the heart who to fall in love with. the way u can capture the attention of the reader tho, is jus wow. u are really, really good.
2006-05-03


PoeticProcrastination
Ohhh...I know the feeling of falling in love with someone you shouldn't.

Nice poem.
2006-04-29



Great poem!
2006-04-28


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Keep on producing Shas. Read this last night and tried to comment but alas my computer shut itself down. Reading it again was a pleasure and confirmed my admiration for your talkent. Great write. : ) kathy
2006-04-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there shas this is so powerful and the last line as Angie says well done rgds mike
2006-04-28