saturday night

 

 

 

it's saturday night

and i'm excited for the couple 

in the apartment above us

they make love on saturday nights

 

usually around one-thirty

i've come to count on it, as, i bet, does she

b/c it sounds 

like it's workin' for her

 

and i'm thinking he's the strong silent type

a hard worker, dedicated

à la lord shandy winding the clock

anyway, that's how i hear it

 

 





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Written on 2015-05-21 at 10:38

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well written, basic and very funny. I really enjoyed this, especially,
"it sounds like its workin' for her."
2015-05-23


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very good. Oh the fun of confined living spaces. You get to hear all the excitement. This made me smile and for me there is no higher praise.
2015-05-23


countryfog
I don't think I've ever told this to anyone, or even thought of it in years . . . my wife and I were just married and moved into a small apartment complex where all the side glass doors and windows faced a commons . . . we made frantic love on the dining room table and when we were done all the neighbors were standing at their windows clapping.
2015-05-22



This is so funny and delightful!
I love it!
If walls could talk they couldn't say it as well as you have.
😆
2015-05-22


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I laughed, reminds me of thin walls of places I have lived in - also the one time I stayed in a hotel, it was late, the only hotel that had room, sadly it was right next to the bars lavatory - spent all night to the sounds of someone with extreme gastric problems! I really enjoyed this

Elle x
2015-05-21