again much is created in few words. the visuals and the emotion is overflowing. :) kathy 2006-05-16
Nice!! Makes me think! 2006-05-08
Hi Gautami, reading your 3-liners I get a feel that you can write much better haiku if you could avoid using adjectives that inspire or make you think/feel. Just try to create the images as observed in your inspired vision or experiences, and leave the rest for readers.
Hope, you don't mind my saying this.
R K 2006-05-07
Love, xxx, Zoya 2006-05-06
this haiku is so very accurate and true to the spirit of the artform well done
rgds Mike 2006-05-06