Mind play


reflecting

crimson greyish sky
water reflecting beautiful light
my mind so drab




Haiku by gautami tripathy
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Written on 2006-05-06 at 11:30

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
again much is created in few words. the visuals and the emotion is overflowing. :) kathy
2006-05-16


Teala
Nice!! Makes me think!
2006-05-08


R.K.Singh
Hi Gautami, reading your 3-liners I get a feel that you can write much better haiku if you could avoid using adjectives that inspire or make you think/feel. Just try to create the images as observed in your inspired vision or experiences, and leave the rest for readers.
Hope, you don't mind my saying this.
R K
2006-05-07


Zoya Zaidi
Nice Hiaku!
***hugs***
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-06


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this haiku is so very accurate and true to the spirit of the artform well done
rgds Mike
2006-05-06