again much is created in few words. the visuals and the emotion is overflowing. :) kathy
Nice!! Makes me think!
Hi Gautami, reading your 3-liners I get a feel that you can write much better haiku if you could avoid using adjectives that inspire or make you think/feel. Just try to create the images as observed in your inspired vision or experiences, and leave the rest for readers.
Hope, you don't mind my saying this.
Love, xxx, Zoya
this haiku is so very accurate and true to the spirit of the artform well done