Just a thought in my mind while walking in the filtering sunlight


Solitary

shimmering sunlight
filtering in through the leaves
I walk so alone




Haiku by gautami tripathy
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Written on 2006-05-06 at 12:05

Tags Thinking  Solitary  Loneliness 

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
wonderful haiku. beautiful picture painted with a wealth of emotion. : ) kathy
2006-05-16


Teala
ah..we all feel this way sometimes I think...great job!
2006-05-08


R.K.Singh
The image has a feel of sensuousness. Fine.
R K
2006-05-07


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah,
Sometimes you walk through the light and are in darkness!
(Hey, that is not a bad first line for a poem, let me work on it, see you a poem later)
Thanks for that inspiring Haiku!
***hugs***
love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-06


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
the sensation true tro the haikhu form is so ably demonstrated her well done

rgds Mike
2006-05-06


pia
Oh I know that feeling ....alone in the sunlight ...A beautiful beautiful Haiku from you! -Pia
2006-05-06