| I Am
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2006-12-16
I like this one! These strong statements from an I. The I here feels refreshed and invigorated.
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| No Life On Earth
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2006-12-13
Intense and real. I feel this one in my body.
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| Inbetween the Silence
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2006-12-13
This one breathes hope and open space. The possibilities of silence. Such a wonderful reminder!
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| strangulation
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2006-12-10
I am not the only one then... Thank you for this one.
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| I've Been Loving You Too Long
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2006-11-29
These few lines tell of a life. And of fortune. It inspires hope that this does happen between a man and a woman. Thank you for sharing this.
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| Paranoia
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2006-11-15
I like your writing as well. They feel very close to what is real.
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| revealed
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2006-11-01
This reminds me of when life is in colour. Always fleeting moments. Neverending longing.
e.
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| the silence
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2006-10-14
Yes.
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| I wish my life like this
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2006-10-01
Hello,
I found this poem a very hopeful one. Hope and trust. I find the picture you paint soothing. I feel like adopting it for myself. Words I need, but have not been able to write. Yet.
Thank you!
e.
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| a monster staring at her neck
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2006-09-22
You make it real with this poem. Very good.
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| Frozen Haiku
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2006-09-17
Sheer terror. In only three lines.
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| En del av mig
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2006-09-17
Instämmer. Vackra ord.
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| My heart belongs to you
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2006-09-17
Well, just been there... And I am just such an idiot to not understand that her heart is elsewhere. It becomes quite clear that heart and brain are two different countries...
I like the way you write. Concise and straight to the point. Somehow taking the shortest way from the feeling to paper.
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| Come on lets sing together!
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2006-09-16
Funny! I am just wondering which end of the telescope you are looking through? That phrase gave me a deja vu feeling!
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| She's an Artist
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2006-09-16
Thank you for this one. Feels like a very loving portrait. I like the feeling of it being a collage, snapshots. It became very vivid in my mind at least.
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| I Want My Heart Back I Want My Heart Back I Want My Heart Back
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2006-09-10
Risky business. With the heart. I do the same thing again and again and again. And I cannot understand.
I like the movement in your poem. Quite dramatic. Like a dance. Or maybe it's a hanging on for dear life!
e.
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| The rain will not stop when i tell it to
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2006-09-09
This feels like a big sigh of relief.
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| Killed Them
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2006-09-09
This is great! Can't tell you why, but it is great.
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| Making Me Yours
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2006-09-05
Wonderful! A picture of real closeness.
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| if you look
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2006-09-02
I wonder if this isn't what happens when I don't see the poem I am reading. Don't even know I am reading at all. It's not art anymore.
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| Jealousy
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2006-08-31
I even saw them kissing yesterday.
Good thing you weren't there.
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| I am sorry Agent Mulder and Scully
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2006-08-31
Growing younger. It is my hope and my intention. Easier said than done. But what is the alternative?
Thank you!
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from UK