Frozen Haiku



in cold silence

something can be heard falling

was it your heart ?



Haiku by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-09-17 at 13:36

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Edna Sweetlove
No.

It was a turd.
2006-10-02


Hopee
Oh!! So good! I got goose pimples...

/ylva
2006-09-18


Kathy Lockhart
This grabbed me! It held me frozen in awe!! My daughters you are marvelous!! mother
2006-09-17


efflux
Sheer terror. In only three lines.
2006-09-17


Rob Graber
Small but weighty! The shift from present tense in line 2 to past in line 3 I find wonderfully enigmatic...
2006-09-17


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow

what a beautiful way of bringing some one to their senses this is exceptioally beautiful well done rgds mike
2006-09-17