a scene from the distance between us


INTRO ; Arie

 

 

you were

churches

without date

 

 

 

the knotty patch

in your mouth

 

became  a sky

tied to a skeleton

 

a little impenetrable

 

like an artificial nail

circling a lily

 

 

 

 





Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2008-01-31 at 18:52

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Kathy Lockhart
there is so many constrast here, the delicate, the strong, the soft, the hard. The way of life and humanity or love and relationships. Reality. Well done my talented daughters. xxx
mother
2008-02-02


normalil
The imagery is strong.
The feelings which prompted this give me shivers.
Great work.
2008-02-01


Rob Graber
Haunting images bespeaking "distance between" indeed!
2008-01-31


Zoya Zaidi
I love this dear Laurdes, especially the last stanza!
How are you doing?
(((Big Fond Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2008-01-31